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Friday, July 03, 2026

The Call of Honor (Empire Rising #18) 3Stars

 

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Title: The Call of Honor
Series: Empire Rising #18
Author: David Holmes
Rating: 3 of 5 Stars
Genre: SF
Pages: 431
Words: 162K
Publish: 2023



Some people die, some surprises are pulled by both humans and karacknids, lots of missiles are fired, lots of missiles blow up, lots of ships blow up. Jonathan Somerville is a clone of his father, at least in terms of character make up. James is now just an old guy, that’s about the limit of his characterization now.

And that’s about the limit of these books. Take from it what you will.

★★★☆☆


From the Publisher
The Karacknid Civil War has ended. Tanaka-lan is the uncontested Imperator of the Karacknid Empire. One task now dominates his desires: the complete conquest of Humanity.

On Earth, James and Christine are all too aware of what the end of the civil war means. For over two decades they have been preparing their civilization for the showdown they always knew was coming. Not content to sit back and let Tanaka-lan bring the war to them, James and his Admirals hatch a plan to go on the offensive first. By striking at the Karacknids’ distant colonies, they hope to goad Tanaka-lan into defending his worlds instead of attacking Humanity’s. Yet Tanaka-lan’s desires are not easily set aside.

Unbeknown to his father, Jonathan Somerville also finds himself thrust into the midst of the developing war. Forced by his sense of honor to lead his own foray into Karacknid space, he may very well ignite the Second Karacknid War before either James or Tanaka-lan desire.



Thursday, April 16, 2026

Debt of Deceit (Empire Rising #17) 3Stars

 

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Title: Debt of Deceit
Series: Empire Rising #17
Author: David Holmes
Rating: 3 of 5 Stars
Genre: SF
Pages: 478
Words: 183K
Publish: 2023



The Void War – 440 pages August 2015

A King’s Ship – 490 pages August 2016

Return to Haven – 495 pages December 2016

The Price of Liberty – 566 pages May 2017

Firestorm – 456 pages April 2018

Siege of Earth – 720 pages June 2019

Mutineer – 530 pages November 2019

Empire’s Doom – 544 pages April 2020

Empire’s Birth – 487 pages August 2020

Imperial Command – 487 pages December 2020

Counterstrike – 525 pages April 2021

Last Stand – 522 pages September 2021

Empire’s Gambit – 746 January 2022

Burden of Command – 557 pages May 2022

Into the Breach – 579 pages September 2022

Shadow Strike – 693 pages February 2023

Debt of Deceit – 718 pages June 2023

Call of Honor – 626 pages October 2023

Battle of the Wilds – 726 pages March 2024

Empire’s End – 609 August 2024

Inheritance of War – 560 pages January 2025

Empire Divided – 696 pages May 2025


*new series

The Voyage Home – 572 pages November 2017

Voyage into Darkness – 531 pages November 2018


That is 24 books in 10 years. That is just under 14,000 pages in 10 years. To put that in perspective, Steven Erikson’s Malazan Book of the Fallen was 10 books long, was approximately 11,000 pages long and took 12 years to complete. The complexity and pure pigheadedness shown by the obvious obfuscation of characters and events in Malazan could only have been done by a human. I am still not convinced that DJ Holmes wrote this Empire Rising series on his own, without the help of AI to do all the heavy pushing.

Whether AI was utilized to write this series or not doesn’t affect my decision to finish it. However, it does influence whether I will continue to read anything else by Holmes (that’ll be a big ol’ “NO” in case you were wondering).

This is not bad writing, but neither has it changed in the 10 years that “DJ Holmes” has been writing it. The characters are exactly the same, just with different damaged parts and being “older”, mainly shown by phsyical things. There is no character growth, which means Holmes hasn’t improved as an author either. This will be the first book I’m giving the tag “AI Written”. I am concerned it will not be the last :-(

★★★☆☆



Mrs Pollifax and the Lion Killer (Mrs Pollifax #12) 3Stars

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